2004年12月15日
いい文章いけないぶんしょう
- yozu
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昨日のがまだ書きかけだけどしかたない、思い付いた順に書くべし。
いい文章なんだろね？って思った時に、それは何かというと「読み手をいらいらさせない文章」だと思うんですよね。一回読むだけで筆者の言いたいことが伝わりやすい、指示語とか主部と述部の関係がはっきりしてて、きちんとナビゲートされる、そんな文章って素晴らしい。
逆に、いけない文章ってのはなにかってーと、「いい文章」の反対で「読み手をいらいらさせる文章」ってことになります。
具体的にはどんなのかっていえばいくつかあるけども箇条書にしてみましょう。
・主部と述部が激しく離れていて、文の終わりには何の話だったんだか忘れちゃうような文章
・文の中で説明されることのない用語や筆者の勝手な思いばかりが多い、ひとりよがりで、読んでる人には全くわからない文章
・投げやりで解決の意図がみえない文章
・話振るだけ振って、以後それに触れられる事なく結局なんだったのよ？っていつまでも気になって仕方なくなる文章
・句読点がはちゃめちゃ
などなどありますが、こういう文章読むときって疲れるよね。
いけない文章を読む時ってこんなかんじに似てる。
日テレのバラエティーに多いけど、じらしてじらして続きはCM後で！って、CMが終わるとCM直前三分前からのリプレイ。やっとCM直前に追い付いて、一、二分進んだかと思うとまたCMかよ！、みたいな、そんなときのストレスに近い感じだよね。ちなみに、そんないらついた状態で見せられるCMなんてとても好意を持って見れるわけがないから、CMとしての効果まで減らしちゃってると思うのでやめたほうがいい気がするんですが…最近はまだよくなって来たのかな？
まぁ、というわけで、みんなとにかくページノルマ達成しなくちゃなのはわかるけども、どうせ書くなら「いい文章」で書きましょうよ。
ただ、ここで書いたまとめが全ての文章に通じるわけでもないってことも充分承知。独りよがりな文章（Ｏかべに表現させれば○ナニー文章とでも名付けられそう）書きたいときだってあるもんね！けど、それ読んで「いらいら」しちゃう人がいるかもしんないよね、って事だけ忘れないでおこうさぁ～
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